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Been chugging away at my failed Gi2W entry so that I can get it polished up for a release. I decided to take some time away from programming to do a bit more artwork, and wound up working on the title screen.

The background is terribad, but I'm at a loss for how to draw the mountains in the distance in any sort of a better way with the 5-color palette restriction.

Any suggestions/thoughts?

First Comment...

Amazing.
Though I can offer no help. Sorry.
To be completely honest, this looks incredible as-is. If I were to suggest anything, it would be to add a cloud or two under the title, but above the mountain peaks.

Good job. (:
Thanks. I tried my hands at clouds, but they just kind of looked bad, so I cut them out. I might give it a second shot, though.

I'm confident about that foreground image. It's not perfect, but it, I feel, is me actually starting to come into my own with the five-color thing.

The TM and copyright marks are there as more of a tongue in cheek kind of thing than anything else. Trademarks and copyright are implied, and don't have to be listed, I know, but if you look back at all the old gameboy title screens (which is what I was trying to pay homage to), they all list them as well. So I figured, go for the full package.
I have to agree with Kumorii, this looks amazing as-is!
The guys looks weird, wheres his other hand? I can barely see it.
In response to Atriosv3
Zoom in a bit, one arm is behind the guy, then the other is infront of him. Ever watch wrestling and see a guy named the Hurricane?
Oooh I get it looks cool ^_^
Epic nothing needs to be changed.
Sexy. And that's coming from me, Ter.
Nice VERY VERY Nice Love it :D!!! But something you could add IF you want would be some night time clouds or something If u want thos :] just tryna help lol i don't know if you can improve much on this.
Brilliant. You just made browsing the art & sound section daily worth it. Seriously. I do it for the rare piece like this, and this is the best I've seen in a while; excluding a couple things that turned out to be rips.

I do agree on the clouds, though, and they're simpler than you might expect. The only tricky part is the colors, but a couple basic clouds could go a long way. That's all I feel this needs.
Maybe even a few stars here and there?
In response to ImmeasurableHate
ImmeasurableHate wrote:
Maybe even a few stars here and there?

I think that would ruin it... but that's just me.
I think you could do 4 colors..
In response to Suicide Shifter
I could do it in one.
In response to Suicide Shifter
Suicide Shifter wrote:
I think you could do 4 colors..

Five is already pretty rough. I have this 2048x2048 sprite sheet I've been working on for two weeks now... could you imagine the pain of working through the several hundred icons to recalibrate for the lost color?
In response to Ter13
Just replace it with a color you're already using and tell people to squint their eyes, it's what I was gonna do with my one color.
There we go, I tried some clouds. I failed at dithering the title, and I've wasted too much time on this already. I'll let you do that. Maybe move the sun farther left in between the two peaks...
enjoy

Keep up the good work.
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