C&C neccassary!!!
Yesterday-
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 May 14 2010, 7:37 am
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I know you've seen my recent posts of icons I made.Yeah,They were crappy but I think im getting better take a look....
C&C neccassary!!! Yesterday- | |
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May 14 2010, 7:57 am
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Asakuraboy
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Not bad, keep up the work :]
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I'll take it Zane444's Base is your inspiration and or reference?
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You have a number of perspective problems with the cloak, your dude's missing hands (all I see are stubs on the end of his arms), and you have problems with shading on the cloak. Additionally, the arms need to be a bit longer.
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D4RK3 54B3R wrote:
You have a number of perspective problems with the cloak, your dude's missing hands (all I see are stubs on the end of his arms), and you have problems with shading on the cloak. Additionally, the arms need to be a bit longer. uh, usually a akatsuki member doesn't show his hands while walking because the sleeves of his coat are covering them. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_0eC04GXY8 | |
I wasn't talking about his hands. I was talking about the cloak itself. Notice how the collar is flat rather than rounded, despite the camera position? Same with the sleeves? And then at the bottom of the cloak, it's rounded, like it should be.
Additionally, he has awkward shading on the sleeves and the creases in the cloak aren't very natural (though that is an aspect of art I have yet to master myself.) See my last post and click on the link for the corrections I named. | |
D4RK3 54B3R wrote:
I wasn't talking about his hands. I was talking about the cloak itself. Notice how the collar is flat rather than rounded, despite the camera position? Same with the sleeves? And then at the bottom of the cloak, it's rounded, like it should be. i wouldn't know anything about what ur talking about i just comentd:S | |
Just click the link.
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Thanks Asakuraboy
Yea Max I used it as a reference lol.. Saber I like your cloak but the other one is too strong... | |
http://www.byond.com/members/EmpirezTeam/files/ gokuakatsuki.bmp
Update: I edited the sprite D4RK3 presented even further. The Akatsuki member now has Goku ssj hair and power pole extend. Nimbus cloud too. | |
well to be serious . it looks like you just copied zanes work . you made the head bigger and i just think your another ripper o.o that got introduced to dreammaker you can see how you just changed the shading . added the facial shading xtended the pants shading . GG .practice on a blank canvas. good luck on your game .
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StarMeteor wrote:
well to be serious . it looks like you just copied zanes work . you made the head bigger and i just think your another ripper o.o that got introduced to dreammaker you can see how you just changed the shading . added the facial shading xtended the pants shading . GG .practice on a blank canvas. good luck on your game . White pants =/= Zane's base nuff said | |
actually i never copied it...i used it as a reference seeig that i cant copy or paste on the free version on Pro Motion 6 which i used!
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if you ask me they dot look the same at all...maybe i should ask zane himself..
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http://i44.tinypic.com/j13sl4.png
If the one on the left is the one you used for a reference, then I would say good job. Yours looks a lot better than that one. | |
Ulterior Motives wrote:
http://i44.tinypic.com/j13sl4.png Like I said...white shorts =/= Zane's base. | |
XLR8ED I probably icon better then you...
Ulterior Motives Yes the one on the lefts is my buddy Zanes...i made the one on the right... | |
Young_D_Rell wrote:
XLR8ED I probably icon better then you... I support you and you say something like that? I said just because it has white shorts doesn't mean it's Zane's base. shit. | |
Sorry I took it the wrong way..I thought you were saying I ripped it too.
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