I changed the eyes a little in the screenshot on the hub entry. I think B was a good basis but I tried to shorten them slightly. The hardest thing about the eyes is capturing the perspective in game. I don't want them constantly looking at the player but more towards their environment.

Masterdan wrote:

Here is sort of an edit of your picture to describe the two major changes i recommend http://www.byond.com/members/Masterdan/files/TNN.png

1st: fix the unibrow, the player icon is large enough resolution to have eyebrows that arent touching

2nd: the eyes are still a little wierd, so i just edited it from scratch to see how I would do the eyes from a reference picture of goku.

I see the point with the eye brows, and that should be an easy enough fix. The eyes however, I honestly think you made it worse than better. I'm stepping outside the area of conventional pixel art and cross-eyes aren't necessary. I understand that there's a pic or two that shows goku as such early in the series, but it's not a look I'm going for. Thanks for the demonstration tho. I'll work more on the base when it comes to it but for now I'm looking to pushing forward.

I'd say A because it looks straght forward, B looks like its planning to kill you o_O

A it's more fiercesome

A

"they look much better with clothes on."
LOL