Well i just spent a little while writing up an intro story for my game.
This is my first time doing something like this, and i did leave school at 16 mainly due to getting bad grades at most things and never wanting to go back, of course as i matured i did regret that, but well yeah i would appreciate opinions, C & C, Troll remarks, negative feedback and positive feedback.
Heres the link bellow:
Intro Story
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 Feb 23 2012, 1:02 pm
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Hmm, you might of left school early but atleast you know how to right at a 12th grade level
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ImmeasurableHate wrote:
Hmm, you might of left school early but atleast you know how to write at a 12th grade level Fixed edit:sad face and its also nice to know that you've sort of added some personal things into the game you've earned my respect for doing that. | |
Akriloth wrote:
ImmeasurableHate wrote: Properly fixed. Also, this is story is serious business (compared to the rest of the game). It's still pretty cool anyways. | |
I love how he have english class going on, now its time to lay my head on the desk to avoid further questions lol.
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Teka... Y U NO POST IN COMMUNITY FORUMS?
I believe Angel Falls needs to be seen, and not just by your huge fanbase, but everyone on byond! | |
LOL "They're just people with no lives other than muting a TV show and voicing over it"
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Wtf are you talking about? o.o
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I like your BYOND Icon ^-^
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Thanks! I made the Skyrim logo short enough to fit, then I customized the gradient. Surprisingly the text took me longer.
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Nice job Tekasss :D keep it up you write better than me :D but of course you do...but very interesting though..and loject,Kozuma,and the other guy you guys are weird Lol:D
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He's from the UK guys you don't dropout at 16 you finish school then.. well at least back then you did
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MechaCloud wrote:
He's from the UK guys you don't dropout at 16 you finish school then.. well at least back then you did LMAO | |
Lol thanks for the compliments yeah as mecha said back then at 16 u finished school and could either get a job or go to college, but I did so bad at school I never even wanted to think about college lol so I went and got myself a job instead.
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I tried to do 6th form but i hated it and ended up getting kicked out for "supposed bullying", i worked a few different jobs for a few years and ended up going to college.
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Well then I wish I lived in UK because I would have loved to end school at 16.
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not like that any more you have to stay till your atleast 18 now.
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Yeah. I would rather take school longer and have a better job.
By the way, I'm appreciative of DM coding now that I learned some ActionScript. Talk about irrelevant errors to the actual error! It's worse than Byond can be! Speaking of Flash, in that class, I know more about Flash than my teacher. He doesn't know movement using ActionScript (modifying X and Y variables) as well as some button functions (click or keypress) | |
We start school at 3, so you would still finish school in the same time we would... I think... I have no idea when you Americans start and end school. Anyways there is a new law that all of the people in my year and below have to do a form of education for two more years, this means free college or apprenticeships for us!!!
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But anyway, I was in an AP English class my Junior year with people who couldn't write this good, so you're fine. School is overrated.