i cant figure this out

ID:270317
 
Mar 10 2006, 4:53 pm
hey i cant figure out what my problem is i mean i tried everything ill put my coding for my icon game and it still didnt it said that there was an error around the mob area it kinda freaky kuze when i do a text-based game it work fine if i have an error please post it on the forum and ill try it thanks o and here is my coding:
world
"test game.dm"
mob
text="1"
Login()
world << "[usr] logs in"
Loc=Locate(1,1,1)
Var
money=0
Turf
grass
icon="3"
density=0
opacoty=0
rock
icon="4"
density=0
opacity=0
water
icon="2"
density=99
opacity=99
Mob/Verb
say (t as text)
world >> "[usr] says\"[t]\""
grab_money
if[!usr.money)
usr >> "You spend some money"
usr.money-=1
else
usr >> "You dont have any money to spend"
usr >> "You become a hobo because you dont have any money to spend on food. " world >>"Someone just became a hobo because he didnt have any money and now everyone gets to laugh at him" usr >> "del [usr"
thanks ill appreciate if u can figure out my problem
Mar 10 2006, 5:38 pm
First off you the dm tags to show you code ,second you have not really said what your problem is. And thrid use the English language i have no idea what "kuze" is

and i think you might want to change

Var
    money = 0


to

var
    money = 0
Mar 10 2006, 6:07 pm
In response to A.T.H.K
Most of your mobs, verbs and turf paths are capital. No caps.

var
mob
turf
verb<dm>

Do not capitalize. Only ones that should be are Login(), Logout(), Move(), etc. Look em up in references.
Mar 16 2006, 4:48 pm
 
world
    name="test game.dm"
mob
    text="1"
    Login()
        world << "[usr] logs in"
        src.loc=locate(1,1,1)
var
    money=0
turf
    grass
        icon='3.dmi'
        density=0
        opacity=0
    rock
        icon='4.dmi'
        density=0
        opacity=0
    water
        icon='2.dmi'
        density=1
        opacity=1
mob/verb
    say(t as text)
        world << "[usr] says\"[t]\""
    grab_money()
        if(!usr.money)
            usr << "You spend some money"
            usr.money-=1
        else
            usr << "You dont have any money to spend"
            usr << "You become a hobo because you dont have any money to spend on food. " 
            world << "Someone just became a hobo because he didnt have any money and now everyone gets to laugh at him" 
            del usr

You had alot of capitalization and punctuation errors.
Mar 16 2006, 4:53 pm
In response to Karrigo
There are a couple other things-

He should not use usr in mob/Login().
He forgot to call the parent proc in mob/Login().
Setting grass and rock turfs to have 0 opacity and density is redundant as those are the default settings.
The if() statement on the grab_money verb is backwards, he needs to remove the ! operator.