A book I made

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Jan 11 2011, 10:04 am (Edited on Jan 11 2011, 12:47 pm)
This was done in Paint Dot Net, not photoshop so I know it could be better. I spent a few hours on this and decided that I'd like some feedback.

Constructive criticism is what I'm looking for mainly.



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Jan 11 2011, 12:08 pm
theres nothing here
Jan 11 2011, 12:16 pm
In response to MademanOne
Agreed
Jan 11 2011, 12:30 pm
I like it, looks good. Id darken the middle part of the book to show some form of lighting, other than that i like its simplicity. good job.

May want to fix the line problems at the top and bottom.
Jan 11 2011, 12:40 pm (Edited on Jan 11 2011, 12:48 pm)
In response to Pmitch
Pmitch wrote:
I like it, looks good. Id darken the middle part of the book to show some form of lighting, other than that i like its simplicity. good job.

May want to fix the line problems at the top and bottom.

Thanks alot, means alot coming from you :o

I left the middles of the page light to show lighting and the outers of the pages darker so that the light was directly above.

The lines was bugging me too but I was too lazy to fix and wanted some feedback before I started to edit it.

Again, thanks :)

Edit: Added direct link for those who can't see it