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Nov 20 2010, 6:36 pm
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This is one of my first tries at pixel art. Comments and Suggestions please. |
Nov 21 2010, 7:40 am
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I think it could be better if you don't use black outline. and add little more shading on the hair to make it look less flat
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In response to Danny112
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Yeah, I thought about the black outline. I will probably get rid of it once I finish with the shading. I know I didn't finish shading the hair, I had to go, so I posted what I had here.
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In response to Danny112
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Mostly finished version. Comments, concerns? |
In response to Albro1
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Pretty nice, all-though it doesn't look like Goku, mess around with his cheeks/eyes/nose a bit...
Color 8/10 Facial Features 2/10 Shape - 9/10 Overall - 7/10 |
In response to Albro1
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The line-art is quick and dirty, you should devote more attention to the outline, its pillar of each work. And i dont really see a problem with black outline here, its dragonball's style. Just correct those lines and make it smoother by using AA and it will improve for sure :) Right now it's not bad.
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In response to Egor
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Thanks for the suggestions. I am not really going to devote myself to Pixel Art just yet, but I may eventually. I don't know how to do many of these techniques, but I am interested in learning some day.
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