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Rather; I'd recommend lowering the top part- it feels a bit disjointed. Otherwise I like it.
You should try pillow-shading it.
In response to Vermolius
How humorous. Too bad that isn't uh... advice at all?
In response to Moonlight Memento
It could use some AAing all around. But before that, try fixing up the lineart alittle more.

Also, your reference doesnt work.
In response to Moonlight Memento
It was a demand, mortal.