First it looked really really really really ugly but a friend made it look better. Any comments?
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3892/33441942.png
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Jul 1 2010, 12:44 am
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Jul 1 2010, 6:15 am
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No source of light, arms get really fat near the forarm
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In response to XLR8ED
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XLR8ED wrote:
No source of light, arms get really fat near the forarm I tried making the arms skinnier but it didn't turn out well. As for the light source,I'll try it. |
In response to Kaimana
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Update:http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6593/20775680.png
Ca you show me what you mean by light source,try editing it. |
In response to Kaimana
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Kaimana wrote:
Update:http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6593/20775680.png i put some colors, i make the arms better hehe im not a good pixel artist but im learning.. |
In response to Midori_Kunei
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This is what I did: - Added a light-source to the top-left corner - Contrasted - Saturated - Changed pallete These are all the things you need to do; you had a good start. If you're going for the Chibi look, keep the large head. But you need those four basic things. I'm not a super experience artist, but I felt like attempting to help you. Hopefully someone can improve on this and help you and I both, further along. |
In response to Black Label Studios
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Black Label Studios wrote:
It doesn't even look like my sprite anymore... |
In response to Kaimana
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what about my edit ??
u dont like it buah!! xD |
In response to Midori_Kunei
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You most likely won't get it if I edit your base the way you want it. It's what I would've done. Just follow by example, it's easier to learn if you follow what I did.
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In response to Black Label Studios
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Black Label Studios wrote:
You most likely won't get it if I edit your base the way you want it. It's what I would've done. Just follow by example, it's easier to learn if you follow what I did. I like your edit,I was just mentioning how it barely looks like my icon anymore. o,o |
In response to Black Label Studios
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Black Label Studios wrote:
Although, I'm still rather new to pixeling i felt like editing your example hope you don't mind xD, i go for the flow and feel of the base looks more then standard lightsource and etc, just wanted to show you can have a good base without that stuff <3 |