Dont look at colors, i know they suck but i will change them at the end ;)
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 Jan 13 2010, 7:10 pm
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I'm trying to get 'pixel' job, so i need to update my portfolio with new pixels. It's first of them, havent finished it yet, but you can see it already and critique it, so i could improve it.
Dont look at colors, i know they suck but i will change them at the end ;) | |
Man, i just scratched the legs, i though its clear. Well, i changed the pose a bit:
 .. I will fix that arm issue latter, now i have to take a rest :P | |
Dude, that's awesome. Are you going to draw a complete set of attack and movement animations?
If so I'd definitely throw together a fighting engine for you to use it in. | |
Well, i didnt think about it.. All depends of how fast will i get a job, because making complete set would take me a lot of time ;f And thanks ;)
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 Fixed arms and hands ;) | |
 Shaded the upper part | |
The proportion on the upper body(The man boobs) and also the 6pack seems pretty squished to the right and stretched from the left(Hope that makes sense) id maybe do alittle redrawing in that area...
Other then that best of luck, its turning out well! | |
The feet are in a really weird position, I'd suggest they faced the same direction, as it looks like hi- yeah... like Maximus said, his body is twisted.
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His left arm is a bit awkward around the inside-elbow area.
Fingers are awkward as well.
The legs are pretty bad. It's as if his upper half is shooting more for "pop out at you" while his bottom half is going for the "paper flat" look.
And his stance for the legs sorta hurts my back thinking about it.
His knees are spread out evenly while his upper body is twisted. If I were him, I'd hire a chiropractor.
Good start though.