Base in Progress

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Nov 20 2009, 5:25 pm
Hello, everybody. I've just returned from BYOND after about a one year break. I've started continuing my progress on my game, Dragonball Unlimited. Among many icon's being made at the moment, I thought I'd share a preview of how my Base Icon will look, more or less. The result's being shown are probably not going to be the final edit.



Comment on my flaws, I'm sure there are some. I'm a bit rusty.
Nov 21 2009, 8:40 am
Oh my, I really like it. It isn't perfect, maybe a tad bit of shading. Probably made the North/South standing states a bit less "Hehe I'm macho", and you have something good there. Keep up the good work.

Also,
This is for your project? I wonder how the othr project is going. :-)
Nov 21 2009, 8:49 am
In response to King Karas
King Karas wrote:
It isn't perfect, maybe a tad bit of shading. Probably made the North/South standing states a bit less "Hehe I'm macho", and you have something good there. Keep up the good work.

Hah, yeah I'm aware of that. This is merely the rough draft for the base. I'll end up making it a few pixel's shorter, and edit the body. The whole revision process will happen after completion of all the icon states(roughly 24). Anyways, thanks for the comment's. I'll post more art from the game as we progress.
Nov 22 2009, 4:12 pm
Perfection144 wrote:
Hello, everybody. I've just returned from BYOND after about a one year break. I've started continuing my progress on my game, Dragonball Unlimited. Among many icon's being made at the moment, I thought I'd share a preview of how my Base Icon will look, more or less. The result's being shown are probably not going to be the final edit.



Comment on my flaws, I'm sure there are some. I'm a bit rusty.

I would suggest either lengthening the legs or shortening the torso. As of current, the lower body of the base is much shorter than the upper body.
Nov 22 2009, 4:17 pm
In response to KDG
I began progress on that last night. I'll be posting the updated version of the base soon.
Nov 23 2009, 4:37 pm
Actually, most of the base anyways, is in a very good proportion and perspective(Especially for the cartoony look). Since the camera angle is 3/4ths the upper body will look bigger in-a-way than the lower, kind of like you have portrayed here. Thus, if the rest of the artwork that mixes with this base are in the same style and perspective it will look great! So unless you aren't making the game in that perspective, I wouldn't change much with it.
Nov 23 2009, 5:55 pm
In response to Bakasensei
All I've done to it so far is fix the arms(shoulder) to make them look a bit less fat, and make the legs longer(2 pixels) to even out the legs with the body.