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Hi I'm Axel Bane. I am new to pixel art and I would like to request some critiquing on this Bear Thief icon I whipped together. Please C&C! Thank you.

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Definitely needs abit of cleanup. Unless you're going for the black outlines on purpose, try some selective outlining. You also want to make the snout more apparant on this guy. Try and apply some AA to the lineart (after cleaning it up of course). May need another color or two, definitely could use a highlight color.