Shusuke1 wrote:

My work:
[url=http://img12.imageshack.us/i/ spiderhollow.png/][img=http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/ 7888/spiderhollow.png][/url]


Reference:
http://img267.imageshack.us/i/ hollowskp8.png/#q=gillian%20hollow

I seriously need help. I didn't actually look at the inference.

Im not a proc iconner(far from that actually), but I edited your spider a bit.
I think you should read some tutos cuz it had no shade at all, nor were the lines good.
Anyway, here is my attempt at improving it