Fishbone Hollow

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Aug 3 2009, 7:56 pm
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By ddog417 at 2009-08-03

This is the finished fishbone hollow. What Can i do to make it look better or is it good as it is?
(I will animate stationary motion maybe tomorrow night)

I realize i didnt shade arms like the body Ill change when i get the chance.
Aug 4 2009, 7:37 am
I think my eyes are decieving me....but.....it looks like it has a penis.


I would definitely lighten up on the dithering and do some color simplification.
Aug 4 2009, 1:04 pm
what direction is the light source coming from? O.o
Aug 4 2009, 2:43 pm
In response to Ninjafro
lmao no its the tail between his legs, but the light source is coming from the north direction.
Aug 5 2009, 11:37 am
His arms are rather bent , and those veins popped out of no where put some more veins throughout the arms.
Aug 6 2009, 3:30 pm
In response to Rasengan3oo4
fuck u fuck face... sike naw ras im scratchin the whole thing and remaking better.
Aug 6 2009, 3:33 pm
In response to D-Dog417
D-Dog417 wrote:
fuck u fuck face... sike naw ras im scratchin the whole thing and remaking better.

Perhaps you're getting a bit carried away here D-Dog417?

"fuck u fuck face"??? btw it should be Fuckface .. one word...
Rasengan is right though.
The arms are indeed a bit bended.
i have no problems with the veins popping out but maybe it would look cleaner if you left them out and just shaded some muscles.
Aug 6 2009, 5:48 pm
In response to Pandora'sSecret
While the first four words are inappropriate, he did say "psyche, Ras, I'm restarting the sprite and remaking it to make it better", I think.
Aug 6 2009, 7:26 pm
In response to Vic Rattlehead
Lol Ras is actually working on the game with me I was only joking with him wasnt being inappropriate... But That hollow has been deleted from my harddrive but ill use ur tips in the new hollow ima make.