I've done 2 versions. One with lightsource and one without.


It's been quite a while since i've done anything like this...
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![]() Aug 5 2008, 4:33 pm
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This is a icon i made about a year ago (progress can be found Here.
I've done 2 versions. One with lightsource and one without. ![]() ![]() It's been quite a while since i've done anything like this... |
![]() Aug 5 2008, 5:08 pm
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Not bad. Make eyes a bit smaller. I like the lightsource one. and you a too much a difference in the eye color.
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Well firstly the arms, try bringing them up a pixel, are you going for a mean look or somthing? if not bring down the eyes lol =P
Just looking at the site AmonR posted you get a better idea for the shape =P (a good link is this http://www.posemaniacs.com/blog/2006/11/stand1_m_v30_h0.php ) Your shade(especally on the pants area) is alittle all over the place, try to design a pallet before you start and if you need to make tweaks to it along the way. When choosing your pallet make sure your shades are not really simler otherwise you wont notice a diffrence... ![]() (the shape edit i suggested) i also deleted your shade lol try it again, i could have done it for you but what would we learn from that lol |
You should do some stuff, like soften the outline, make the eyes a lil smaller, and there is some random light shading on the left foot, it should be shaded properly(By taking the right part of the foot and making it a lil darker). Also you can add some shading to the pants, cause usually nothing is ever pure black.
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Eh, you made his upper torso too big, unless he wants to be a muscle man xD Reduce it a pixel or two, then Axerbo should get on shading.
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