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the menos lineart for BA, still work in progress (obviously xD)


anyway, the usual helps appreciated


Source :

http://z11.invisionfree.com/Advanced_Games/ index.php?showtopic=30&st=0&#;last
Wow, thats great! I can't get on the site though cause you need to register. But you should paste the image link here.
In response to Bakasensei
In response to Cowqueefer
Im pretty interested in your posts =P thats pretty good man

only thing i can really say is try making the clothing thing look more baggy by adding a few other lines down the center.
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Lookin' good so far. I'd suggest moving the mask down just a little bit, and connecting that center tear in the bottom. I don't understand what those lines are right under his mask either. Anyways, keep it up.
Cowqueefer wrote:
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the menos lineart for BA, still work in progress (obviously xD)



hmm, the lines are meant to be like, torn clothe around his mask, didn't like how the old menos had the cloth stuck to their heads
In response to AmonR
AmonR wrote:
and connecting that center tear in the bottom. I don't understand what those lines are right under his mask either. Anyways, keep it up.


what do you mean? it looks connected to me
In response to Cowqueefer
I mean instead of having it torn, pull it together.
In response to AmonR
AmonR wrote:
I mean instead of having it torn, pull it together.



ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, got it
In response to Cowqueefer
So what do we think?

Betterer?


Menos, lol
In response to Cowqueefer
Cowqueefer wrote:
So what do we think?

Betterer?


Menos, lol

Yea just like that. Snip those stray 2 pixels though.

Now color that beast!
In response to AmonR
AmonR wrote:
Cowqueefer wrote:
So what do we think?

Betterer?


Menos, lol

Yea just like that. Snip those stray 2 pixels though.

Now color that beast!


lol, didn't see those pixels


"snip"
In response to Cowqueefer
Menos, lol

Line Art


Menos, lol

Some color





In response to Cowqueefer
Very nice, but blue to me would make more since than purple.
In response to Lord Ulquiorra
hmm, i'll try that and post the two versions


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Blue (a quick edit)

Purp-ish

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In response to Cowqueefer
Cowqueefer wrote:
hmm, i'll try that and post the two versions


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Blue (a quick edit)

Purp-ish

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Very nice. I like the blue-ish color more. Keep up the amazing work!
In response to Cowqueefer
Yes the blue version looks better to me too.
In response to Cowqueefer
The purple one looks more real to me, cause people think there is no true black so when its shady it turn purple.
In response to Bakasensei
Menos lol

So what do you think?

I think thats pretty much done, though i may be missing somethings
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