Akto wrote:

Here is a little piece of work I'm making from the anime series Bobobo-Bobobobo. Its called the Gasser Bomb. As the name clearly says, its a fart. >.<( I think its an awesome attack. >.< )

Reference Picture:
http://sdb.drshnaps.com/sheets/Media/Other/Other/Gasser.gif
Only picture I could find of it.

My picture:

change the pallet alittle more, maybe add a lighter colour to the pallet, make sure it isnt to yellowish and go for a more browner tone and it will be good... show how your going to animate it also lol im interested... also it looks like your putting them lines in for the sack of it lol try making it so it shows diffrent levels and parts of the smoke :p

Akto wrote:

-Changed the pallet.
-Thinking of how to animate it.
-Tried to make more smoke layered like.

improved, now try making it alittle neater, also it doesnt have to have that line all the way across the smoke, so take some out =D

Thats very cool, I love that effect ^^