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 Apr 22 2008, 6:09 pm
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This is for start hub hope u guys like it, i icon the dragon by though if i had pic i would did little better C&C and ty you.
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The dragons are a bit flat and bland, and their flames aren't exactly great either. Right now the dragons look very non-organic, I recommend looking at pictures of dragons that other people have drawn or CG renders of them. It could give you a good idea for a better looking and more lifelike looking dragon. Also, mixing pixel artwork with auto effects like those in the title text is a big no-no. It creates an ugly contrast between the smooth and automatically rendered work of the text and the hand drawn look of the dragons.
The idea is pretty good, two dragons blowing flames at each other, and those becoming one, even if it is only for looks. It just needs to be cleaned up a good bit. | |
Master_Water wrote:
This is for start hub hope u guys like it, i icon the dragon by though if i had pic i would did little better C&C and ty you. What exactly do dragons have to do with Naruto anyway? | |
Aren't you the guy who has been posting around saying you are going to make a Samurai Champoo game..
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What would you like us to say?
eh i personally would use photoshop for a banner, since your trying pixel then maybe find a reference, try doing a bigger dragon and center it, add shading and whatnot because atm it isnt looking to good lol they are the straightest flames i have seen,
just a few i found on google images.
Dragons:
http://www.idrawgirls.com/images/speedcreature_dragon003.jpg
http://www.canadiandragon.com/gallery/drawings/ dragon-yell.jpg
http://www.shaolinkungfu.co.nz/awm/dragon.jpg
Flame:
http://www.xtremesled.com/newtemplate/catalog/images/ oval%20yellow%20flame%20copy.jpg
http://www1.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/4415674/ 2/istockphoto_4415674_flame_symbols.jpg
dont worry there was a time when i would make flames like that lol just keep trying and look around the pixel joint and the showroom and get a better idea of pixel art and maybe pic up a style.
goodluck ^_^