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Shinobies

ID:258013 Mar 29 2008, 12:42 pm
Nidaime Hokage	Well for my game I was working on some hairs and some clothing and here is what I got so far is two shinobies, just two random guys ( might use them as NPCs ) C&C welcome

Mar 29 2008, 2:16 pm
Master_Water	shouldn't there be a red circle on the black shirt

Mar 30 2008, 5:25 am
Nash_M1V3P	I like em, Good to see a 2 tiled base in a Naruto Game. I'll check your game out.

Mar 30 2008, 1:13 pm In response to Master_Water
Jordan11	It looks pretty good. Keep up the great work.

Mar 30 2008, 2:27 pm (Edited on Mar 30 2008, 3:02 pm)

Hulio-G

Nidaime Hokage wrote:

Well for my game I was working on some hairs and some clothing and here is what I got so far is two shinobies, just two random guys ( might use them as NPCs )

C&C welcome

Surprisingly, I've notice you improve at a ridiculous pace.

Heh, I pretty much stopped the edit after noticed the arms were unsymmetrical. Anyway, the way you shade your work it's like your sketching and it makes all your material look unfinished. In your shading smoothen out corners,edges, etc. Things will look better.

An example of how your shading is on the right.

Weak areas:
Line art - http://derekyu.com/extras/pixel03.html
Choosing your colors (Literally pick your colors from each other not randomly just because they look similar) and of course how far to distance them apart for good contrast (3dness) - http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5614/ spaceoutcolorsaa1.png
Pillow shading - The chest is all I needed to see - http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html

Heh my fault, I thought this under "Works in progress" otherwise I wouldn't have looked into it so much...Op, oh well.

Mar 30 2008, 2:47 pm

In response to Hulio-G

Nidaime Hokage

Hulio-G wrote:

Nidaime Hokage wrote:

Well for my game I was working on some hairs and some clothing and here is what I got so far is two shinobies, just two random guys ( might use them as NPCs )

C&C welcome

Surprisingly, I've notice you improve at a ridiculous place

Heh, I pretty much stopped the edit after noticed the arms were unsymmetrical. Anyway, the way you shade your work it's like your sketching and it makes all your material look unfinished. In your shading smoothen out corners,edges, etc. Things will look better.

An example of how your shading is on the right.

Weak areas:
Line art - http://derekyu.com/extras/pixel03.html
Choosing your colors (Literally pick your colors from each other not randomly just because they look similar) and of course how far to distance them apart for good contrast (3dness) - http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5614/ spaceoutcolorsaa1.png
Pillow shading - The chest is all I needed to see - http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html

Heh my fault, I thought this under "Works in progress" otherwise I wouldn't have looked into it so much...Op, oh well.

Thank you I will look at this to get better also when you said "Surprisingly, I've notice you improve at a ridiculous place" did you meant paste? or that a went to a place to. Also about the arms I must have upload the wrong one the arms I fixed but apparently didn't upload it right improve or something xP

Mar 30 2008, 3:01 pm In response to Nidaime Hokage
Hulio-G	Nidaime Hokage wrote: Thank you I will look at this to get better also when you said "Surprisingly, I've notice you improve at a ridiculous place" did you meant paste? or that a went to a place to. Lol, what are you talking about? : p

Mar 30 2008, 3:27 pm In response to Hulio-G
Nidaime Hokage	What you mean by "Surprisingly, I've notice you improve at a ridiculous place"

Mar 30 2008, 8:56 pm In response to Nidaime Hokage
The dark prince majin vegeta	I'm assuming he meant to say "Surprisingly, I've notice you improve at a ridiculous pace," as in your skills have improved rapidly.

Mar 31 2008, 9:48 am In response to The dark prince majin vegeta
Nidaime Hokage	Yeah I though it was pace.

Mar 31 2008, 10:27 am
Nidaime Hokage	After I read the links Hulio gave me a did two more NPCs (Naruto&Sasuke)

Mar 31 2008, 12:49 pm In response to Nidaime Hokage
Bakasensei	Sasuke looks gert though Naruto looks horrible >.> His anatomy doesn't look right(Mainly in the shoulders) and his face looks weird compared to his body. His body also looks kinda weird.