Wall Attempt; - I need to add a background to it.
Comments and Criticism are welcome. Try not to go to hard on me, its my first post here, =P
-enjoy.
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 Mar 18 2008, 4:43 pm (Edited by moderator on Mar 19 2008, 8:16 am)
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Cliff Attempt;
Wall Attempt; - I need to add a background to it. Comments and Criticism are welcome. Try not to go to hard on me, its my first post here, =P -enjoy. | |
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Mar 18 2008, 9:23 pm
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Master_Water
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Cliff look ok but need to shape it up cause on the end there no even.
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W1ldr3x wrote:
Comments and Criticism are welcome. Try not to go to hard on me, its my first post here, =P We won't boil ya on yer first post. Maybe your second :). But, ya did come here looking for help and opinion, right? Couple of things: 1) do what ya can to post in PNG or GIF because JPG has a tendency to change the pixels of your work and what we end up seeing isn't the original pic, 2) Try to post your work in img HTML tags so peoples don't hafta click thru to see it ( < img src="the url of your pic" /> ) -don't copy and paste that, type it in ). I've found imageshack works well for both of these (use the very bottom link imageshack gives you - the one that sez 'direct link' ). So...on the walls: it's a pretty good design. It's hard to tell what the texture actually is, tho (because jpgs change the texture). But the brickwork is pretty good :). It's also a little hard to tell where the floor is compared to the walls, but I suppose that's what you meant by making a background for it. I'd try using a different color for the floor, or possibly using different shades for both (lighter on the walls, darker on the floor). Also, you may want to outline the walls running N/S with a darker shade. Outlines can make things stand out/come forward to the viewer. Something like:  (That light outline on the right side of the wall didn't work too well, but hopefully you see what I'm suggesting) Anyway, you're ahead of a lot of tilesets I've seen around BYOND. Keep going! | |
