Critique, anyone?

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Aug 26 2006, 5:02 am (Edited on Aug 26 2006, 5:15 am)
Somebody on the forums redirected me here to ask for critique on my art.

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How is it?

((I haven't really gotten to shading it. So, don't worry about that.))
Aug 26 2006, 8:49 am
a few critiques I saw elsewhere about this, the arms are not in the right pose for holding a handgun.

I will definetly have to say that the overall top down aspect you did was wonderful

anyways, I did a redo of it, with some changes to the coloring and shape(s)

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Aug 26 2006, 9:26 am
In response to Cryptic
They both look nice, but I like the skin tone on Cryptics slightly better.
Aug 27 2006, 5:28 am
In response to Cryptic
It looks nice. I'll take a closer look at this later.

The players left arm, from his perspective, doesn't seem to have an elbow? It looks like it has a tad bit too much curve.
Aug 27 2006, 7:21 pm
In response to Cryptic
Cryptic's version of it seems to have "box-ish" shoulders. I'd try smoothening it out. =/