Thorg's Haiku

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Oct 12 2006, 11:33 am (Edited on Oct 12 2006, 11:48 am)
I missed the down,
But Elation says make Haiku,
Or he hits me again.
Oct 12 2006, 11:36 am
quick hide before DAU says something stupid
Oct 12 2006, 11:53 am
DeathAwaitsYou knows,
That the reaper walks to all,
And is a man's man.
Oct 12 2006, 12:17 pm
Thorg wrote:
I missed the down,
But Elation says make Haiku,
Or he hits me again.

You do know the format of a Haiku, yes? This particular one had a 4-8-6 syllable format. Haiku have 5-7-5. >_>
Oct 12 2006, 12:22 pm
I miss-ed the down, 4
but elation says make...
or he hits me again OK SHUT