One Piece: APT

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Sep 13 2010, 5:51 am
Lmao! Look how far I have come...


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I laugh now... >.>
Sep 13 2010, 9:36 am
I prefer the smaller sprite.
Sep 13 2010, 10:11 am
In response to Jordan11
That base is crap! :P
Sep 13 2010, 10:24 am
In response to Akto
Looks better then the big base in my opinion. But that's just me.
Sep 13 2010, 10:31 am
In response to Kaimana
Its all proportioned wrong and the pallete is ugly and just... Bleh!
Sep 13 2010, 11:14 am
Akto wrote:
Lmao! Look how far I have come...


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I laugh now... >.>
You have really improved, but your still lacking alot,
1. Saggy boobs?
2. Anatomy? ok..so how the hell do you cross your legs?
3. Base seems to have a hint of pillow shadeing,

Just giving my views :P hope you dont mind.
Sep 13 2010, 11:17 am
In response to The Saikyou Alliance
Lmao! Yeah the sitting state is fucked up... :D

But they have boobies till they get strong and muscular!
Sep 13 2010, 3:18 pm
In response to Akto
Cool beans. How long have you been pixeling?
Sep 13 2010, 6:03 pm


Made a small edit to show you that more colors, and more shades is absolutely beautiful.
It gives more detail into the art and adds more shading.
Also fixed up some of the anatomy for the stance.
Sep 14 2010, 1:36 am
I prefer the big base just for its size, but remember if you improve the base size you have to improve the surroundings too, otherwise it shall be like giants, one thing i would do is google the stances your base is taking and make sure the proportion is right.

Also colour definition on objects is a must imo, see the box, show that its not flat by adding some volume to it.
Sep 14 2010, 12:51 pm
Ide stick with the smaller base
Sep 17 2010, 7:11 am
Yay! New stuffz!





Do the colors look inviting?
Sep 17 2010, 7:28 am
In response to Akto
I'm liking the enviroment. Though, it'd be nice if the grid on the sand would be removed.
Sep 17 2010, 7:46 am
In response to Maximus_Alex2003
The edit is nice but I'm not looking for detail... mostly simplicity.

That stance was removed for specific reasons... :P
Sep 17 2010, 8:55 am
In response to Akto
Akto wrote:
Yay! New stuffz!





Do the colors look inviting?

The legs still look weird... your legs don't bend at the upper thigh.
Sep 17 2010, 9:38 am
In response to UPD4T3
Mine do!.... Lol I'll fix it.
Sep 17 2010, 9:47 am
In response to Akto
Nuuuu akto punch, don't do et don't do teh targetness system thing
Sep 17 2010, 1:26 pm
In response to Jlxati
put some pants on?
Sep 18 2010, 2:29 pm
In response to Danny112
This doesn't look that bad =D Looking forward to it.
Sep 20 2010, 12:09 am
I definitely like the smaller sprite better :p. ... .... Nooooooo I can't even lie lol! I like the bigger sprite better because it actually looks well done. Well, it could use some work, but it doesn't look like straight up beginner work like the first sprites. They looked... unworthy for you lol.

But, I agree with the others. You should really fix where the knees bend when the characters cross their legs. It would definitely look a lot better. The colors, I really don't have that much of a problem with, however it would make sense to make them a bit more colorful :p (Not just the sprites but the environment as well) . It would certainly look more attractive that way. Would bring that, uh, One Piece feel into the game :).

I actually look forward to trying out your game brah, even from the work you posted here so far. It may need more work done, but it looks passable in my book...though passable isn't always the best, so keep working on it :D! Good luck to you man.
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