I made an easy [if cheezy] BYOND banner/ad . Feel free to look at it and make some remarks.
http://www.rockriver.net/~wolf01/BYOND1.htm
~wolf01 [terranwolf]
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 Aug 9 2003, 12:56 pm
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The main thing that I would say is 'wrong' is that you really are going for the smooth look and it occasionally slips itself. The thing you need to probably look at better is the ovals at the have fun bit. Otherwise its nice and stylish :)
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Not to bad, cant say it is perfict, and it needs sound. Much better than anything i have ever done in flash.
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Three problems I have with it: You could probably have put more effort into it, it's cheesey, like you said :D, and the byond logo isn't there. Actually I'd like it much better if you just put the BYOND logo somewhere.
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Where you have "BYOND" wrote down in blue, you would need to change it's colour, as you can just barely see the "ND" part of the "BYOND".
I don't know if you meant to have it wrote as "BYOND", but I am guessing you are, although, I would advise that you do change the colour of your text considering that it is blending in with the background too much... So, besides the colour of your text, I would say it is fairly ok :) --Lee | |
It's great except that the spiraling thing at the start, right before it says Create Games, it starts off again and gets halfway done before it switches to Create Games.
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