Can someone help please
I need someone to test my website for bugs or any mistakes including grammar mistakes, This will be the last review of my website after this one I am going to start advertising it and releasing the website to the public.
I also need someone to check the website with a browser that is not IE4+
If anyone has any suggestions please fell free to let me know.
If anyone wants to, you can submit a test tutorial or just fill in the forums on the contact us page or the advertise with us page or the submit page and click submit to send the test request to me.
If its possible can some people please sign up for the computertutorials.org forums and post at least 1 topic in different subjects of the forums.
The websites URL is: http://www.computertutorials.org
Thanks for helping wow byond has really changed since I was here
ID:188049
 Jul 26 2004, 12:53 pm
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NICE! I really like this.
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well submit page is support to lead to the index page and the contenue buttons are support to lead to the the forums.
can you be more Specifec on what looks wrong. The design is great huh lol worked really hard on it. | |
http://img59.exs.cx/img59/8947/mspaintfun.jpg
There :D Also, on the "Submit" page, the navigation buttons don't work for me. ~Kujila | |
I can't access the site, but from Kujila's screenshot, I noticed two mistakes nobody has mentioned yet:
- You misspelt "limited" in the bold text there. - You mixed up "there" and "their"; it should be: "...companies and webmasters to advertise their site..." (bold emphasis added by me). - In "...you much act quickly", it should be "must", not "much". From what I can see it looks like a decent design except for the cross-browser problems, nice work! I recommend you get Firefox at http://www.mozilla.org/products/firefox/ if you're creating websites; it helps to test all your pages with at least one Netscape-based browser as well as IE. Of course you knew that already, but my point is it's much quicker and more reliable to do it yourself. =) | |
I only looked at the main page, but here is the text back with necessary spelling/grammatical corrections (corrections marked in bold):
"Arby Abraamyan, President/Founder: “We are dedicated to help lost and confused viewers out of their misery.”" "Computer tutorials.org is dedicated to help and educate people about our computers today. Our hope is to get people help for their computer needs. Here, Our staff has established a friendly community which allows the viewers to help others. Even though computer tutorials.org is new and short on content, it still has lots of offer. For example, our tutorials are free to the public 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Our tutorials aren’t like other websites'; we display only the finest and most accurate tutorials in computer tutorials.org. Our tutorials are written by the public for the public, that way you can get answers fast. Here at computer tutorials.org we try our best to help out and as you may have noticed we do exactly what we say we do. Kind Regards Arby Abraamyan" "If you have a business or a website, the best way to get your ideas and websites known to the people is to advertise. Unfortunately, to advertise your website or business on the web you have to pay about $100+ to advertise on a decent website with a lot of traffic. Well, why pay when you can do it for free? Yes, you heard me, you can advertise for free! In order to advertise with computer tutorials.org for free you have to write a tutorial. When you write a tutorial, just submit it and ask for a banner ad or a text link to be placed on the bottom of the tutorial. If your tutorial is accepted, your tutorial will be displayed on computer tutorials.org and your banner ad or text link ad will also be displayed under the tutorial followed by your name." "Does your computer reboot all by itself? Computer Tutorials has released a new module that teaches you why this happens and how to stop it." "Ever wanted to learn how to speed up your computer experience? Well, now you can with our new tutorial that will teach you all of the computer shortcuts and commands." "computer tutorials has released its new message boards. Now you can ask your questions and get your answers even quicker. So what are you waiting for, sign up now!" And I'd suggest some different wording in a lot of places as well... Some of the text doesn't seem as professional as it should (yes, I realize that the site seems geared towards a more friendly and informal "community" atmosphere, but the text still needs to be written out in a more formal fashion) For example, the text about advertising would be written better as follows (of course, even my improvements might not be the best, and can be refined even further, but this is to push you in the right direction): "If you have a business or a website, the best way to get your ideas and site known to the people is to advertise. Unfortunately, to advertise your website or business on a decent website with plenty of traffic, you often have to pay a large sum of money (Often over $100/month!). Well, why pay when you can do it for free? Yes, you heard me, you can advertise for free! In order to advertise with computer tutorials.org for free you simply have to write a tutorial. When you write a tutorial, just submit it and request that a banner ad or a text link be placed on your tutorial. If your tutorial is accepted, it will be displayed on computer tutorials.org and your banner ad or text link will appear at the bottom of the tutorial page, followed by your name. It's that easy!" Again, not even my re-wording of that paragraph is perfect, but it should show a decent example of how you should be writing things on your site... | |
Other than that, I like the way it's all laid out.
I use Mozilla 1.8a1 for Windows.
Your "Submit" page does not display correctly in Mozilla. Also, when you click the "Continue" button, it just takes you to the same page you get when you click "Submit" so it's in a loop.
Oh, and your freefind site doesn't have any theme to it, and it has a broken image on top.
~Kujila