Lest I Forget (Vortezz's music!)

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Nov 13 2005, 10:10 pm
http://www.purevolume.com/jamiebell

I just spent a good eight hours pumping this bad boy out. I hope you like it :)
Nov 13 2005, 10:28 pm
Sweet :) Can't really understand what you say, and the voice I think needs to be blended in a bit more to the music, but it still sounds great. Nice job.
Nov 13 2005, 10:44 pm
In response to Kunark
Kunark wrote:
Sweet :) Can't really understand what you say, and the voice

Lest I Forget
Jamie Bell

City lights like stars shine
These paths devoid of life tonight
And in this roaring lull, I am alive.

And I remember your eyes on mine
And I still feel your warmth tonight
You'll never leave my heart
You'll never leave my mind

I'll admit it took a while
To gather the courage to smile
And I know you'll be there in the end

So I'll raise my chin up high
Know I'll never let you die
I just hope that we can be one again.

I think needs to be blended in a bit more to the music, but it still sounds great. Nice job.

I will do another mix of it tomorrow when I've got over the initial impression of it, and then perhaps get back to you :)

Thanks Kunny!
Nov 14 2005, 3:48 am
In response to Vortezz
Nice nice. pretty damn good. Though I feel like you could improve with the beat. The symbols particularly seem out of place.. The voice is pretty good but it seems strained at times.

Practice makes perfect.
Nov 14 2005, 4:55 am
Pretty cool! I like the ending... sounds like it fades into another song (or could).