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Aug 6 2014, 4:31 am
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i tried , im no expert on trees btw , im just trying to show you different ways to go about it , i made 2 versions in 2 diff colors
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You know what you are doing with this piece.
I have two suggestions: - Keep your darkest colors near the edges to give it a nice simple and clean look; Keep the outline, it gives character - There wasn't really any information on the piece but I assume its for a game. I would shift the trunk to the middle only because once you start putting the trees onto a map, it may look awkward. (Or you could make multiple variations of the tree to break the repeated feel) Visual: |
In response to Akto
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Akto wrote:
You know what you are doing with this piece. ++ |
[Insertation of Advice] -Make the leaves show more honestly looking at the tree it looks more like a bush. Define dem leaves bro, thing of this as the hair shape it up stop with the shaggyness. -Second take off dem w/e leaves they are in the middle wtf is this is?!, Personally i see what you're going for but it's not working here.Dem PIMPLES needa GO! -The trunk, dat body needs a work out. You should make the Trunk more so you can see it, i honestly thought it coulda been a brown carrot with other carrots growing out of it, Shave em legs up bro. DO YOU EVEN LIFT!!!!!~~~~~ -AND THE leg hair cmon bro their is too much! Just add a little here and there and make it show more it'd look much nicer. PS: i didn't do a full edit, honestly this edit took me 10 minutes cause my co-workies are not responding to me on skype. ._. i needed something to do on my day on. PSS: It doesn't look complete, The bald spot on the top right of the tree makes it look like a retarded tree .-. srry if that sounds rude but yeah it's all sharp around the edged then right at the top it gets round. |
In response to VixiV
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It's not a retarded tree, it's just challenged ;o
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0.0 thanks for advice, yea I am just practicing creating color palettes and trying to get a grasp on things such as trees... I used spirit ages as a reference, not going to use tree on any game just practice XD...and dang vixi...harsh D: lol
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In response to LethalTeen
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LethalTeen wrote:
0.0 thanks for advice, yea I am just practicing creating color palettes and trying to get a grasp on things such as trees... I used spirit ages as a reference, not going to use tree on any game just practice XD...and dang vixi...harsh D: lol Lol sorry if it was harsh xD, CC mode was turned on, felt like i had to be serious. But it's better than most tree's people post for cc i'll give you that :3 |
In response to VixiV
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VixiV wrote:
They both look great! (: |
Thanks for the cc XD , decided I am going to use this gor a game so going to try to fix it the best I can and Here is edited version:
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In response to LethalTeen
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LethalTeen wrote:
Thanks for the cc XD , decided I am going to use this gor a game so going to try to fix it the best I can and Here is edited version: Looks too bright now. |
I like the warmer color, but the highlights are un-needed on a tree.
Those sprouts at the bottom look off, plus shouldn't be getting highlighted if they're in shade. |
lol i don't think i can give any contribution to this post, but this is what happens when i try to draw trees.
It's just one big bubble of colours descending into darkness. |
I have been wanting to make another video and you just gave me the idea of making one on Tree. Well here's it is:
Tutorial 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T671jp361d0 Tutorial 2(gif): Still images: Other tutorials: http://www.byond.com/members/ A2J2TIWARI?command=view_post&post=818117&first_unread=1 |
I never understood this fascination with small trees. You guys are drawing them like they're barely 9ft tall.
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