ID:162548
 
Login()
icon_state = gender //when a player logs in, get them the right icon state for
..() //the gender of their key. Then call the parent!

proc
DeathCheck() //check to see if an attack is deadly
if (HP <= 0) //if the defender's HP is low enough...
world << "[src] dies!" //give the death messaging

verb
attack(mob/M as mob in oview(1)) //attack a mob within 1 tile of you
usr << "You attack [M]!" //send this message to the usr
oview() << "[usr] attacks [M]!" //send this message to everybody else
var/damage = rand(1,10) //assign a random # to a new variable
world << "[damage] damage!" //tell the damage to the world
M:HP -= damage //take away the damage from M
M:DeathCheck() //check for death with a proc

say(msg as text) //what the usr says is passed into "msg" as text
world << "[usr]: [msg]" //the world sees chatroom-like output



WHY IS THIS WRONG???
(IS SAYS INCONSISTENT INDENTATION)
You have 'proc' and 'verb' indented from Login(). It thinks you are trying to define them both under Login(), which wouldn't make sense. Try taking a tab off of 'proc' and it's enterior, and with 'verb'. It should fix the problem.