LoL Comic Contest

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Jan 26 2014, 12:57 pm (Edited on Jan 26 2014, 1:02 pm)
So I'm trying to win this contest. You have a template to make a comic with, its only 4 blocks.

This is a rough draft, and I'm trying to get some feedback on it. Obviously it is a comic and should be humorous, but it has to be League of Legends-related so unless you are a player you probably won't understand this.

Pardon my terrible handwriting.

The title is: "Pentakill".



Any C&C regarding the content and the work itself (Obviously it is a WIP, but critiquing the content of the boxes and other possible things that could make better sense in them is fine)?
Jan 26 2014, 6:34 pm
Did the lineart for the first panel and started coloring Nidalee.



Closer view:
Jan 27 2014, 5:55 am (Edited on Jan 27 2014, 6:57 am)
Haha, this reminds me of when they first started with the contest and I submitted this: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j175/Demonthought/ comic_text.png

BTW.. What trinket is being shown?
Jan 27 2014, 9:37 am
In response to Akto
The blue trinket, in the second frame.