Dec 4 2011, 3:22 pm
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Enzuigiri
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Enzuigiri wrote:
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Is it alright if I don't like the base either? .__. The base should be more Top-Down, your base looks like it would be for side scrollers. I appreciate the shadow under the base, that looks cool and it's nice, but the anatomy of the upper body don't make sense, I believe it's the transition from abdomen to the hips. Also the head is extremely flat at the top. The shading also looks really dull as well, try a larger contrast within the pallet to make the character design REALLY pop!
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I cant tell you wither its okay to not like my base or not because everyone has there own opinion. I don't know what you mean by "The base should be more Top-Down". I've looked at the waist because a lot of people have complained about it and I've fixed it. I'm still figuring out the head, and as for the shading I've fixed the pillow shading on the base but I'm not sure about the contrast problem.
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KarasuProductions wrote:
Is it alright if I don't like the base either? .__. The base should be more Top-Down, your base looks like it would be for side scrollers. I appreciate the shadow under the base, that looks cool and it's nice, but the anatomy of the upper body don't make sense, I believe it's the transition from abdomen to the hips. Also the head is extremely flat at the top. The shading also looks really dull as well, try a larger contrast within the pallet to make the character design REALLY pop! Come back when you show us a better one. | |
Your base's abdomen is a bit wrong, perhaps you could use this link for help: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13525 (Try scrolling down until you see the Anatomy picture)
The head is a bit flat, you could round it out, and after rounding it out enough move the eyes just a bit further away from one another (or not) and then move them a pixel down (or not). | |