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Nov 25 2011, 3:39 pm
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 Came home from work a few hours ago and was playing around with creating a new character.this is the outcome. playing around with dynamic and multiple light sources here. I named him "Galeo" he's using the fire technique to the left of this page,at least its weaker state. Still a WIP. C&C is welcomed 17 colors excluding the background. | |
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Nov 25 2011, 4:00 pm
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Joshuaray202
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Looks awesome, can't wait to see how it looks finished!
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Lmao, he looks like my visual communications teacher from 11th grade. Except he didn't have fire shooting out his back.
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You want constructive and criticism?
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Looks terribly choppy
Ryuk25 wrote: You want constructive and criticism? Comments and Criticism fewl. | |
i like it...u people trying to diss this can go kill yourselves
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BetaMan12 wrote:
i like it...u people trying to diss this can go kill yourselves referring to that enzu person | |
The redness behind him kind of makes it look weird, like a phoenix-centaur combo. But like you said, it's a WIP. It does look artistic even with multiple art source and I'd love to see this with the other leg done and the flames fleshed out.
+yea'd so far! | |
BetaMan12 wrote:
BetaMan12 wrote: So doing exactly what the OP ask which is comment and criticize automatically makes my last option suicide right? No, you are a legit moron. IN THE LIVING FLESH! I have never seen one up close before. It looks choppy and badly shaded at spots on the actual person. Not bothering with the flames because they looked rushed. | |
Chill out Enzui, the fact that someone points you out just draws attention to themselves.
@ Beta: Enzui's comment does "seem" to imply insult, but it is a straight to the point critique without any flowers or puff. Though he wasn't descriptive to which part was choppy so it's not to constructive. I don't see exactly where it's choppy. (Not an art guru) So pointing it out would help both Zane and other viewers. | |
I am chill o__o. I don't get mad at people online. Waste of time and NRG.
Anyway this should clear things up. The green circles represent where I find it choppy and rough. Some AA should smooth it out. The blue circle represents where I find shading inconsistant. Like, his back is in flames(a light source) but the spot RIGHT next to the flame is still dark as can be. | |
Im also confused as to the choppiness he speaks of. The flat red is not final.in fact its simply a place holder shaded bold red as it separate it visually from the rest of the sprite. its meant to be a sash/cape of sorts.
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I posted exactly what I was referring to. And I also said I'm not focusing on the red or fire because it looks rushed and unfinished. Click the link and you will see.
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He looks like a fusion between Rick James and Infernape. It doesn't get any more awesome than that.
Therefore, Enzui's complaints are invalid. | |
EmpirezTeam wrote:
He looks like a fusion between Rick James and Infernape. It doesn't get any more awesome than that... LOL | |
Truseeker wrote:
EmpirezTeam wrote: Is there any particular reason why you added two more periods to my sentence? I believe my original comment only had one. | |
I'm trying to slowly add more to peoples quotes so I can edit a whole quote without them thinking twice about it. (Jedi Mind Trickish)
That and I was trying to let them know there was more to what you said. I didn't feel like doing this: >... so I added more to your quote. *wink* | |
It costs cash to modify my sentences. I accept all methods of payment except back rubs. Only exquisite women of Latin descent are allowed to give me back rubs.
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That fire is too yellow. I understand it's still wip, but adding some of the red/brown from pants would help.
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EmpirezTeam wrote:
It costs money to change my words around. I accept all types of payment excluding massages. Only beautiful ladies of Latin descent are privileged to give me massages. Is that accepted? | |
![this should clear things up.](http://i39.tinypic.com/2agk9k1.png""){kind=link}
