Hi, I just want some CC with this Duel Academy building that I made. (Although this by far is not my best)
http://puu.sh/2nEWI
No Trolls Please.
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 Mar 25 2013, 2:22 am
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Mar 25 2013, 2:24 am
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PAKUUN
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OHHH Nooo im a Troll!! *Explodes*
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Die >:O
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Looks good.
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Thanks HBC !
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Looks okay a bit flat, and has a base from another game.
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Carnage Productions wrote:
Looks okay a bit flat, and has a base from another game. I won the base (I'm one of the owners of that game) but I'm not quite sure what you mean by flat :P | |
this is what he means by flat ---- http://static.igossip.com/photos_2/august_2011/ Keira_Knightley_article.jpg
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that base is naruto evolutions base lmao, you got it off crazah? and haha pakkun
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Carnage Productions wrote:
that base is naruto evolutions base lmao, you got it off crazah? and haha pakkun He got it off Sphinxe, being in the dev-team with him. I also have permission to use it. Now into the actual picture. There are 2 things i noticed. First one, is that there isn't any shadow under the red roof. Not sure if this is intended, but it looks like the roof is coming out, and closer to us. So adding a little shadow right under there, might help. The other thing, is the shadows on the doors and the 4 towers. Normally, shadow on doors aren't so "curwy" if you get what i mean. It's pretty straight. | |
Perspective is confused at best. The front of your building looks like it's being seen from a side-on perspective, while the roof is somwewhere between 3/4 and size view. Not to mention that you have put a flat face on a cylindrical shape. That's gonna look bad no matter what you do.
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I guess Sphinxe didn't tell you, but he returned. He wanted to actually complete Naruto: Ninja Adventure, but got into collage and quit Byond.
PS: I never said he was on the NE dev team. | |
Yut, please keep your crap off this post please! I want to avoid disputes and what not so please keep on topic.
Thanks Niro, I'll add that in. Ter, what do you think I can do to make it look a little more like the perspective of the roof? | |
@kboy:
http://emptyeasel.com/2008/08/25/ an-introduction-to-pixel-art-and-how-to-create-your-own-pixe l-artwork/ Take a look at the featured image in that tutorial, and the blending methods. The perspective in that tutorial shows you that the roof has to curve with the walls of the structure in order to look right. | |
Why the hell are you using NE's base. NE's base is riped from a gameboy game anyway. It doesn't even match your freakin building. You would be better off making your own base. Instead of taking some other base that was taken from something else. You need the practice anyway bro not trying to be rude. No one is trying to be original on byond these days.
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Behave please. And thanks, Ter.
If you want to talk to me about N:E, page me - Not put it on my thread. Thanks. | |
Honestly you would be better off scrapping the entire building, the textures need so much work the build has awful perspective the gradient effect on the roof is just lazy add some actual shading.
Those pillars are completely off perspective wise as well.. and the turfs could use some polish as well. I would suggest a lot of practice at form and shading before starting on a large building like that, You lacking basic fundamental pixel art skills to be doing something so large. | |
-.-" I'll pass, thanks.
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Lol you never take advice reason you'll never improve..
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I do take advice. I took it in the last 2 posts that Ter and Niro did, thank you.
I'm passing on Mechas' idea due to the fact I have something else I'm doing to it. Ever think of that IH? | |