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Hey there guys, so me & ImmeasurableHate are making an SAO game and I have started on the base icon, I need some C&C so that I can get it perfect for the game. The bases face is blank for the purposes of adding face overlays later on so please do not comment on that.

Idle:
This image is provided by Akuja Katsumi.

Walking (6 frames):
This image is provided by Akuja Katsumi.

All C&C is welcome as long as it is good C&C.

Thank you, Akuja Katsumi.
The walk is very jittery the legs kind of snap to position when they move it's not really a smooth movement I would probably fall over if I tried that IRL.

Other than that it's nice! although it does look familiar.
In response to A.T.H.K
A.T.H.K wrote:
The walk is very jittery the legs kind of snap to position when they move it's not really a smooth movement I would probably fall over if I tried that IRL.

Other than that it's nice! although it does look familiar.

Okay thanks.
mmmm dat ass
The idle states aren't the same height... you should probably make the base with less detail.

also since this is SAO i think you should bring the extended leg in more to the center of the base gives it a more anime style walk.
In response to Southend_boi
Southend_boi wrote:
The idle states aren't the same height... you should probably make the base with less detail.

also since this is SAO i think you should bring the extended leg in more to the center of the base gives it a more anime style walk.

Thanks ^^
Kind of stiff, but looks good. Good luck with your game
Your walk animation need some work. Both legs should be in motion- one bearing weight moving back, the other moving forward into position. Right now, it looks like one leg is rubbing the ground while the other stays still kind of like a bull readying to charge. I think you have the "off" leg snapping forward too soon.
I love SAO :P best of luck for this one!!!! Please continue ^^
In response to Elk Darkshire
Elk Darkshire wrote:
I love SAO :P best of luck for this one!!!! Please continue ^^

They stopped on it.
In response to Flysbad
Flysbad wrote:
Elk Darkshire wrote:
I love SAO :P best of luck for this one!!!! Please continue ^^

They stopped on it.

Ouch.
Yup, Akuja went missing after first day LOL, all he made was GUI and health bar.
http://i.imgur.com/qqNFM9A.gif

The best I could do to help, so I hope it helps. Try comparing and point out major differences you see, that should help you a bit. By the way, your shadowing could be better, especially in legs.

Edit: btw, the way I saved this oddly caused some problems with the colors and there may be a few black spaces in between spaces of the arms or feet/legs, whatever the case is. I just didn't feel like fixing it all.
In response to Soundz
Why those ears bouncing lol :)
In response to A.T.H.K
Rofl, oh, I moved the head and didn't pay the ears any attention. -- ORRRRRRRRRR he's stomping cause he's angry because he so badly edited.
In response to Soundz
lolololololololol well if I did it it would've been worse haha.