Hey there guys, so me & ImmeasurableHate are making an SAO game and I have started on the base icon, I need some C&C so that I can get it perfect for the game. The bases face is blank for the purposes of adding face overlays later on so please do not comment on that.
Idle:
Walking (6 frames):
All C&C is welcome as long as it is good C&C.
Thank you, Akuja Katsumi.
In response to A.T.H.K
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A.T.H.K wrote:
The walk is very jittery the legs kind of snap to position when they move it's not really a smooth movement I would probably fall over if I tried that IRL. Okay thanks. |
The idle states aren't the same height... you should probably make the base with less detail.
also since this is SAO i think you should bring the extended leg in more to the center of the base gives it a more anime style walk. |
In response to Southend_boi
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Southend_boi wrote:
The idle states aren't the same height... you should probably make the base with less detail. Thanks ^^ |
Your walk animation need some work. Both legs should be in motion- one bearing weight moving back, the other moving forward into position. Right now, it looks like one leg is rubbing the ground while the other stays still kind of like a bull readying to charge. I think you have the "off" leg snapping forward too soon.
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In response to Elk Darkshire
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Elk Darkshire wrote:
I love SAO :P best of luck for this one!!!! Please continue ^^ They stopped on it. |
In response to Flysbad
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Flysbad wrote:
Elk Darkshire wrote: Ouch. |
Yup, Akuja went missing after first day LOL, all he made was GUI and health bar.
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http://i.imgur.com/qqNFM9A.gif
The best I could do to help, so I hope it helps. Try comparing and point out major differences you see, that should help you a bit. By the way, your shadowing could be better, especially in legs. Edit: btw, the way I saved this oddly caused some problems with the colors and there may be a few black spaces in between spaces of the arms or feet/legs, whatever the case is. I just didn't feel like fixing it all. |
In response to Soundz
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Why those ears bouncing lol :)
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In response to A.T.H.K
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Rofl, oh, I moved the head and didn't pay the ears any attention. -- ORRRRRRRRRR he's stomping cause he's angry because he so badly edited.
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In response to Soundz
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lolololololololol well if I did it it would've been worse haha.
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Other than that it's nice! although it does look familiar.