Experimenting.

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Oct 26 2011, 4:30 pm (Edited on Nov 6 2011, 5:33 pm)







Experimenting a little with sprites with a little higher resolution. this one was done in a few hours just to feel out the basic character design.

She's one of five major recurring characters in Spirit Age's story; she plays the head of one of the countries, specifically where wind is revered as a deity. A country of nomads who live off the land. the people of this country are especially known for the informality, dressing casually for every event, they are also generally outspoken and stern in their beliefs.

I'd love to give more information on her but i thought that i should save it for when I introduce the remaining four major figures.

Her design itself is pretty much a work in progress.What I'm really trying to do is incorporate the main characteristics of her country into her design.

C&c Please
Oct 26 2011, 4:31 pm
Fantastic.
Oct 26 2011, 4:33 pm
Left leg looks weird fix the knee. Great job.
Oct 26 2011, 4:34 pm
You mean contrast?
Oct 26 2011, 4:34 pm
Her tits need to be larger because wind is like a gust and gust rhymes with bust and bust is another word for a woman's breasts. So making the boobs huge would be a great way to establish the fact that she's the ruler of the wind planet ( or whatever you were calling it, I'm too lazy to scroll up and see ).
Oct 26 2011, 4:37 pm
Lol last time i gave one of my characters a huge "bust" i got scolded for it. besides that she's the only figure who also plays the role of a warrior,seeing as they hunt etc. how is she to hunt when those things are swinging about?
Oct 26 2011, 4:45 pm
Fantastic work, as usual. The legs need work, but that should be obvious for an artist of your caliber. Especially since this is a WIP piece.

Admittedly, the shading on her boobs looks a little strange.
Oct 26 2011, 4:47 pm
D4RK3 54B3R wrote:
Admittedly, the shading on her boobs looks a little strange.

Thats two votes for bigger boobs.

Make it happen.
Oct 26 2011, 4:51 pm (Edited on Oct 26 2011, 4:58 pm)
well the problem could just be that i have the corset drawn too low.

Im mainly taking note and correcting anatomical errors.

I'll create a character just for you ET. :)
Oct 26 2011, 5:59 pm
Zane444 wrote:
well the problem could just be that i have the corset drawn too low.

Im mainly taking note and correcting anatomical errors.

I'll create a character just for you ET. :)

Awwlh, was about to add another vote tot he large boob count. Lol, She can still fight with them swinging just make very fluid animations. Lmao, Jk.

Oct 26 2011, 6:06 pm
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/405/alignmentk.png/ The chest seems out of place, i would move it to the left a little more, and arm is way too stiff (the one farthest away from us).

I don't see a reason to have a higher resolution portrait, clogs too much space, and is a waste of time. You can totally do a smaller version and have the same quality with your style.
Oct 26 2011, 6:39 pm
Her boobs look weird.
Oct 26 2011, 6:40 pm
Why are you using such a bright background?
Oct 26 2011, 7:33 pm
I think her breast should be enlarged makes her look more like a amazon warrior.
Oct 26 2011, 9:13 pm
Others noted the other points, but I find her hair/face to be misaligned, the angle of the face, and the angle of the hair parting doesn't match, her hair parts on a curve. The head shape from the hair seems a little off too, could be because of the hair style though.
Oct 26 2011, 9:20 pm
I wasn't saying that her boobs needed to be bigger. There's some really strange shading on her right boob. That's all. :P
Oct 26 2011, 9:25 pm
D4RK3 54B3R wrote:
I wasn't saying that her boobs needed to be bigger. There's some really strange shading on her right boob. That's all. :P

I THINK that might be scars, but it definitely looks like strange shading, a bit of a design flaw if it is a scar.
Oct 26 2011, 11:40 pm
Judging by the young lady and the stone dragon on the left side. You truly have brought your art to the next level!

Sheesh, I'm so glad someone spotted that left arm(Mes), lol. Also, There is some truth to these perverted critiques. Shes turning her torso. So from this angle the Chest should appear infront of the arm. This helps fix the 1st issue with the left arm, It gives you an armpit! (2nd issue, "stiffness" came from the awkward unrelaxed elbow).

http://i43.tinypic.com/9fto42.png (I messed up your shading here and there so take care of that)
Oct 27 2011, 3:23 am
Reminds me of Lux from League of Legends. I approve.
Oct 27 2011, 3:44 am
I agree with El Wookie...

FOR DEMACIA!
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