Tree WIP

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Jan 4 2013, 5:44 am
I was working on a tree and got stuck. Didn't know what to do with the inner side of the tree. Adding some outer lines made it look weird so I just left it plain like this and thought I'd ask the community.

Any tips?

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Jan 4 2013, 6:03 am
I like it so far, add shading from bottom up. or light from top to bottom.
Jan 4 2013, 6:45 am
There a few things, you've taken a typical pine tree shape but made it look like a normal leaf tree, combine that with the tree trunk you've chosen it looks like two different projects.

The tree trunk in itself looks nice, I like it but it is too wide and big for the folliage you've put on it.

it's a 6/10 for the folliage
it's a 8/10 for the tree trunk
it's a 5/10 when combined.
Jan 4 2013, 7:46 am
Make the Folliage(What Pandora called it) Bigger and it would fit nicely. Nice Job!
Jan 8 2013, 4:53 am
Lol i neeed to learn how to make trees and etc...can you guide me.?
Jan 8 2013, 9:32 am
The leaves look flat and lazily mirrored in comparison to the trunk, like it has two different art styles going on.