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I will be making individual body parts.

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im still a beginner so id like to hear some advices, ik the shading is messed up, can some 1 suggest a good tut ?



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the abs are not fully finished

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So, i thought about finishing this piece of art to learn more about male anatomy.


in my older post, some people told me that the shoulders are too stiff and wide, so i thought about loosing them down a bit.

i want to make the legs for this icon

tell me which one is better, and what should i do with the abs because i feel they are not very well pixeled.

ps: this is not for a game.



I dislike writing my crits, so I think its best to simply show you, with a few things pointed out.
- Your colors are to similar, this results in them blending in.

- I found a random green like color on your base, where the light source generally is, I do hope you didn't use it as a light source, as its not visible unless you zoom in.

- Define the muscles, think of everything as a single shape, and work on it, then combine said shapes, and consider how they are combined, some form of attachment.

I am going out, so I couldn't make an extensive edit, but this should do.

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Completely ignore the way I did the abs, I didn't even take a second look at them.
thanks alot, so my main problem was choosing the colors and defining the muscles? is the outline it self good?
Arms looked to stiff, no one stands like that, they tend to be slightly loose.

Is this for a base? I sincerely hope not, as its excessively large.
nop, its just to help me understand more about shading and the anatomy
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any improvments? and the pallete is now original unlike before

the abs are not fully finished
Better, but still needs work, keep on improving.
alright thnx alot for the help
Torso is too long in all these. which makes the arms too short. Your arms dont stop at just below your waist, your elbow bends at your waist(above your pelvis) and your finger tips reach about midway down your thigh.
i will look into that, but can u show me a tut or a pic so i can manage to observe it better?
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Is this a better color?

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Best art you ever did Sers000. and you finally got membership
::) , thanks
I like number one the best.
thnx, just to let u know, Number one is the worst one :)
i think number 6 is the worst you put too much light into it
I'd personally like to see the Sixth one with the First ones color palette.
sure i will do that
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