TheLionsRoar wrote:

It took you two months for this?

(inb4Vrocaan)

Woah there now, a lot more insulting than helpful. I don't think it's bad personally, better than most of what's posted here. But two months is a LOT longer than it should've taken for just this.

@immeasurableHate it toke some days i felt something was messing which alot,like detail but by the time i saw the problem i all ready added to much stuff to retrace my steps.reed the roof is bad :l i tryed to add a asian design to the roof after looking at some pictures of ramen shops.

so can anyone tell more on what more or what i could look at for detail becuase i wanted to do a stone detail but i wanted to try something diffrent :D

Alright, there is a lot to say about this :/ but I will only talk about 2 things, so I don't get lost in a rant. (I like where you're going with this, so do not take my criticism in a bad way.)

1. You messed up your perspective and it's no longer isometric. Your diagonal lines need to be 2x1 always, except for odd shapes. But since this is a square building..always. Currently I see random transitions from 2x1 to 3x1.

2. You used colored out lines, but then switched to black outlines, which drives me insane. Particularly on the sign, which isn't dark enough to need black outlines. Try to stay consistent. If the whole thing used black outlines I would get it, however using darker shades as outlines, then using pure black outlines makes those objects with black pop out when they really don't need to. (i.e I don't think you want everyone's eye drawn to the window frame lol) Now if it's something REALLY dark to where you have to use black, then okay, but nothing on here is that dark.

P.S. not sure what's up with your text there, with the grey stuff on top? looks like smudged paint. :I

Edit: I remade your building :I and yes I changed the roof because this was supposed to be a quick example and tiled isometric roofs are not quick lol.

@Lilius hmm..i see so i would like to ask you this :3 hmm can you tell me more about the "2x1" so i can get a better understanding,also ill try not use black unless it is needed ima save your post to look back on when i need help also i love your remake :) its fixes alot of my problems like the "Manga" i was trying super hard to make it in a 3D text like i see in other isometric textes but it didnt look right the way i did it. but thank you so much i think your comments will help me in the long run :)

@Jmurph ill look at that now before i go to bed

Soniow wrote:

@Lilius hmm..i see so i would like to ask you this :3 hmm can you tell me more about the "2x1" so i can get a better understanding,also ill try not use black unless it is needed ima save your post to look back on when i need help also i love your remake :) its fixes alot of my problems like the "Manga" i was trying super hard to make it in a 3D text like i see in other isometric textes but it didnt look right the way i did it. but thank you so much i think your comments will help me in the long run :)

@Jmurph ill look at that now before i go to bed

the 2x1 that I am talking about is shown in a picture in Jmurph's link actually. It's image 1; see how the diagonal lines are like, 2 pixels wide for every pixel up? that's what I mean. Kind of hard to explain :/ I can try to do a little picture if you need.

http://www.gotoandplay.it/_articles/2004/10/tcgtipa/ the_isometric_line.gif

This is an isometric line.......2 pixles horizontal,go up 1 and 2 pixles....repeat.

@Lilius OH i see i thought that what you was talking about :) ok ill try doing that better