Cc Wanted and or Needed by the way these are old
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 Jun 25 2012, 3:30 pm (Edited on Jun 25 2012, 8:13 pm)
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thx and i didnt pillow shade on all of them my base was confuseing becuase i was useing a pattlie a friend gave me my buildings are not at a side scrolling perspective i looked at games with a straight view and i used it and the anatomy of the drawing is fine ? it has all the body parts and bones points,etc
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I'm sorry to tell you soniow.... but you're on one of the worse stages of the artist wheel... What skyiden said is correct, please don't try to argue with him when he's correct.
http://i43.tinypic.com/15d57o1.jpg The wheel... please review your basics or read some tutorials on how to pixel if you're not sure how. http://opengameart.org/content/les-forges-pixel-art-course Tutorial for you. http://image.shutterstock.com/display_pic_with_logo/2423/ 2423,1107188721,3/stock-photo--d-render-depicting-human-anat omy-muscles-male-125648.jpg the anatomy of a human body for you also. | |
I told him this and he started raging at me telling me off and stuff bu i have no room to talk since I also fail at pixel art but atleast I can admit it right?.-. You try to help him and just tells you off and say theres nothing wrong he thinks its all perfect. And you know that person sucks when they think there work is good.
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Dude i didnt tell you off you told me off saying they sucked and stuff when the fact that im new to makeing buildings etc you said you where good yet your saying your bad now i know mesmerise im not good at buildings and things but these are old i change my shadeing style which means yes he is indeed right i suck when i made those im not argueing im saying what i did to do those things
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I never told anyone I was good ask anyone who knows me..
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Soniow wrote:
thx and i didnt pillow shade on all of themTrue, but his point was that you did pillow shade and you need to stop. my base was confuseing becuase i was useing a pattlie a friend gave meWhoever gave you that pallet quite frankly didn't know what they were doing. my buildings are not at a side scrolling perspectiveYes, they are. These buildings are at a perspective of being looked at straight-on, not from above. Hence, a side-scroller or first-person. Since BYOND doesn't do first-person... and the anatomy of the drawing is fine ? it has all the body parts and bones points,etcRefer to the link about human anatomy. Your anatomy is way off. when my effects where decentNone of the art here is even decent. That is the cold hard truth. To conclude, don't ask for C&C and then just dismiss all points given to you. If you want to get better you have to be able to look at what you are criticized about, look at your work, and say "yeah, that person is right. This sucks, and I should take their advice". Thinking that your art is great when in reality it is far from it is not good and you won't progress at all. | |
well ok albro insteed of ganging me on MSn with "Immeasurablehate" then you should add me and tell me like a real person tell me what i need to do or better yet say it here if you want to help me like your Cc just did add me at [email protected]
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I'm not sure what that first part regarding ImmeasurableHate was about, so I'll ignore it. I'm not going to add you, because frankly I'm not the best person to be giving C&C. People like Skyiden are much better. That isn't saying that you need to add him, that is to say that you need to post on the forums and let them reply.
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Albro he is mistaking you with Gensho lmaoo
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And yet again he would still be wrong, although we are friends, I have no bias when it comes to your work, your both terribly, but one of you admits that and welcomes it with open arms, whilst trying to better themselves, the other, i.e. Soniow, makes excuses to avoid taking criticism, and attempts to clam he is doing it right.
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Soniow these aren't old xD You made them like a week ago, if you're gonna post don't lie about it. Also I told you what is wrong with them... You just don't listen to me.
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immeasurablehate on msn said he was better i said and i qoute "Why are your characters so skinny ?" and he said all these things about how mines look unrealistc and its ugly,etc and legacy you gave bad instrusions... you just say they where bad and you did really say "you should fix this or that" you just said "Wrong"
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Stop arguing, and learn from the crits given in this thread, or don't post work any more expecting crits, if you simply wish to make up excuses to avoid fixing anything.
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Skyiden wrote:
Stop arguing, and learn from the crits given in this thread, or don't post work any more expecting crits, if you simply wish to make up excuses to avoid fixing anything. | |
You said why is my base so skinny? It isnt skinny most bases are that width and he is suppose to be slim and as I said im not a pixel artist I pretty much have no idea what I am doing when I practice it.
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Neither the less, here are my crits..
- Stop pillow shading, its ugly and lazy.
- Your base makes no sense, his outline is brighter than his primary, secondary colors
- Your buildings have a side scrolling perspective, hence I presume you are making a side scroller, and so does your base.
- The anatomy of the people on the billboard, makes no sense, please revise it.