kinda.. messy, ill elaborate later.

I like most of it. Here are some improvements I can think of:

- He's missing a hind-leg.
- I've never seen him without all of his hands clenched in some way, your back leg is open and relaxed, which makes it uninteresting.
- The two-color shading on that spiky fin-thing that runs the length of his spine seems off. I'd add a third, significantly darker shade for depth. See also:

• http://www.mydragonballwallpapers.com/media/cache/2/2/ 150x150-2-2-5-22588-shenron.jpg
• http://images.saiyanisland.com/data/508/Shenron.jpg

- See above, for the horns. I'd use a darker tone in there as well to give them a harsher look.
- There's too much symmetry. For instance, consider those two long whisker-like things that stick off of his face. They're doing the exact same thing; they should be flowing almost randomly, independently of each other. Asymmetry is good.
- The line-art for the spiky thing around his tail looks a bit awkward.

Other than that, I think you did a good job.

Kuraudo wrote:

I like most of it. Here are some improvements I can think of:

- He's missing a hind-leg.
- I've never seen him without all of his hands clenched in some way, your back leg is open and relaxed, which makes it uninteresting.
- The two-color shading on that spiky fin-thing that runs the length of his spine seems off. I'd add a third, significantly darker shade for depth. See also:

• http://www.mydragonballwallpapers.com/media/cache/2/2/ 150x150-2-2-5-22588-shenron.jpg
• http://images.saiyanisland.com/data/508/Shenron.jpg

- See above, for the horns. I'd use a darker tone in there as well to give them a harsher look.
- There's too much symmetry. For instance, consider those two long whisker-like things that stick off of his face. They're doing the exact same thing; they should be flowing almost randomly, independently of each other. Asymmetry is good.
- The line-art for the spiky thing around his tail looks a bit awkward.

Other than that, I think you did a good job.

Thanks
-I actually thought i could get away with out drawing that other leg, I guess not lol I'll add them in
-For the spikes would adding a lighter color give the same effect or just stick with adding more darker color? I never really noticed how board like the spines were... I treated them like flowy hair spikes. Also why does the line art around the tail look weired to you?
-Lastly, I have to disagree with the hands and the Asymmetry, the reference i was using had the hands open so I left them that way. Also,...I dunno, I like symmetry a lot...only the head is basically fully symmetrical which I felt isn't so bad.

thanks : )

It looks good. It's a huge improvement from the last dragon.