32 by 32 base and Water

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Feb 20 2010, 2:58 pm (Edited on Feb 20 2010, 8:19 pm)
Hi, I was wondering if I could get some commentary on my base. I want to make my current ones better aswell as have an idea of how I should go about making a running state. Some of my side view icons arn't that great. Thank-you!

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Here is my water I'm working on. I would like to hear other people's opinions on it and how I should go about filling it in.

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Maybe I need a fresh start?
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Is this any better?
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Feb 21 2010, 12:43 pm (Edited on Feb 21 2010, 12:56 pm)
Any comments? I think my last one came out the best. Is it too small for quality detail?
Feb 21 2010, 4:01 pm
In response to Darkjohn66
Last one was better than all of them,but with more work im sure you can do better.
XD
Feb 23 2010, 11:47 am
In response to Kidpaddle45
Its been over 2 days and Ive only had one comment thats not much compared to what I am seeing aroundme /=
Feb 23 2010, 12:59 pm
In response to Darkjohn66
The water looks awesome. I especially like the top version in the bottom two sample images you've posted.

The sprite base is harder to comment on tactfully because of glaring anatomy issues. The arms are totally disconnected from the shoulders in many poses and overall it looks stiff and blocky. In my opinion, your best bet is to look up some anatomy primers around the tutorials section and start over from scratch.
Feb 23 2010, 8:38 pm
In response to Saokymo
How is this, its a 32 by 45 base outline.

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Feb 24 2010, 12:58 am
In response to Darkjohn66
The arms are way too wide when compared to the lenght of the base and the legs are way too skinny. The ears are placed too high making it look like monkey ears. the neck could be 1 pixel shorter.
I'd suggest to search for some tutorials about this.
Good luck!