Dragon Ball Chou II Basework (WIP)

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Feb 22 2009, 4:58 pm

Akira Takahiko

Hello all, some may know me some may not. I'm Roi from Dragon Ball Chou, currently me and a few other developers are making a sequel . Though the first one isnt anything to be proud of (Finale Rip). I feel that making a game from scratch will make things better. So for starters heres the base work for the combat stance. After a few critiques I was told by Pmitch to puth the colors in the spots they belonged. But anyways please crit me on this. =D

P.S
Didnt realize I had the icon as my avatar.

Feb 22 2009, 5:29 pm
Nosley	Looks pretty fly... guy.

Feb 22 2009, 5:32 pm
Akira Takahiko	Now that I look at it...there are some things I should've changed...

Feb 23 2009, 10:44 am
XxJUICExX	Overall, the shading and colors look pretty decent. But, it's hard to read, can you post a reference, or if you didn't use one, mayby something close to what you were trying to get it to look like. Mainly the back leg is hard to read, I don't understand where it is supposed to be. Also, I think the rights side of the chest shouldn't be defined with a different color than the left side.

Feb 23 2009, 1:06 pm
Troy1121	The pose looks weird. I have no problem with the shading or anything, but it looks like his head is a little dispositioned on his shoulders. Were you going for a martial arts pose? You might want to speed up the overlays (animation) also.

Feb 23 2009, 5:54 pm In response to Troy1121
Akira Takahiko	Yeah now that I look at it it has a littlle too many flaws.

Feb 24 2009, 10:33 am In response to Akira Takahiko
Troy1121	Love the shadow though. I also love the shading, but it has a couple of problems. But in overall it's pretty good.

Feb 24 2009, 1:29 pm In response to Troy1121
Akira Takahiko	Thanks. I give the credits t pmitchh for helping with the shading though. Thats why it looks pwn xD

Feb 24 2009, 4:26 pm In response to XxJUICExX
Mohfar1	yeah im gonna have to agree with alot of comments juice made. i can sorta of tell how the pose is gonna look but i need a better reference to see edit this. I cant really tell exactly whats happening.

Feb 25 2009, 12:19 pm In response to XxJUICExX
XxJUICExX	Here's my edit. Your shading was good, I just wanted to simplify the colors, and it didn't look right to me un-simplified. Well here you go, for 1 frame.