Akto's Work(s) in Progress

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Aug 2 2008, 6:40 pm (Edited on Aug 2 2008, 7:07 pm)
Hey, Pixel Art Society!

Here is my latest work. I have recently join a team and I'm working on some environmental turfs. I will update this post with other turfs if I need C & C from you guys. C & C of coarse!

Tree:
http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=treewc3.png
Aug 2 2008, 6:48 pm
That's a GREAT start. But it looks to me, all you did was copy half and flip it. That's a big no, no. You don't notice it AS MUCH in the top of the tree, but the trunk looks really bad with that style. Also, give more 'depth' to the roots, make them longer and wider.
Aug 2 2008, 6:49 pm (Edited on Aug 2 2008, 7:09 pm)
In response to XxJUICExX
Thanks. Yes sadly, I did copy and flip. >.<i thought something looked a little weird with the trunk.
<br/> Thanks again.

Here is the edit:

http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=treewc3.png
Aug 3 2008, 2:21 am
In response to Akto
Akto wrote:
Here is the edit:

http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=treewc3.png

That's the same as the first link..
Aug 3 2008, 5:29 am
In response to KashikoiMeisai
It now is. I put it on the first post.
Aug 3 2008, 6:27 am
In response to Akto
It looks like you did a gradient on the trunk, which isn't very good, cause they have random textures there too.
Aug 3 2008, 8:51 am
In response to Bakasensei
Lol. I couldn't think of anything else to do with it.

I took of the texture lines. Look any better?

http://img112.imageshack.us/my.php?image=treepa6.png