~After some changes according to you saying the legs are too short and the zanpakutou is too small i changed it~
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 Nov 18 2007, 1:04 am (Edited on Nov 18 2007, 10:12 pm)
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Ichinose:
~After some changes according to you saying the legs are too short and the zanpakutou is too small i changed it~ | |
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Nov 18 2007, 9:44 am
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Chrislee123
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OMFG thats great i like it. Im back by the way XD
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did u make that?
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Bizarro wrote:
Ichinose: Its good. The only peeve ive got is the size of Zangetsu, and Ichigo's arm length. Try shortening the arms and raising his sleeves up alittle. Zangetsu is very big as you know. Make it abit thicker, and point it down, making it come down alittle past his knees. | |
Legendary Goku 10 wrote:
Bizarro wrote: Unless this character has very short arms in the anime, do not shorten those arms at all. In fact, you should probably lengthen them. The problem is a sort of optical illusion: we want the arm length to correspond with the length of the leg below the knee; your character's lower legs are slightly shorter in proportion to the upper leg than they should be, causing the arms to look out of sync. It's a weird problem, perhaps moving the knees up a pixel would help, or perhaps you should just lengthen the lower leg by a pixel or two. It's a great image, and I really like the feet, but there's one problem that strikes me. Shades help to define depth, so your eye treats each pixel of the same color as thought it is at the same depth. Your character has black border around him garment, telling the eye that every edge is at the same depth, making your character's garment (and, therefore, almost his entire body) look flat. I'd experiment with defining shapes via shade instead of lines; it's a rewarding practice. | |
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